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I Love ...........(a senryu, I think ?!?)
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I Love ...........(a senryu, I think ?!?) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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I love my "True Love" And all of my family, Friends, enemies, too "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-15-2002 12:12 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethel, a Senryu or Haiku are developed on a 5-7-5 syllable count. If your last line read "Friends, Enemies, too" you'd be on the mark! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, Sunshine. I'm changing it now. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There y'go! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, sweet lady. I appreciate your help. "Love makes the world go around" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
To love ones enemies...now that takes a special kind of person  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 This angel sends you Feathery hugs of friendship From the clouds above Yay!!! And we all love you too so much! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, you are a true angel, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
hoot_owl_rn....... Thank you for reading my poem and for your reply. I really do love my enemies....I may not like their ways, but I love their souls. Besides, there could be some reason that they think they should be my enemy !?? Anyway, I personally think that everyone has some good in them. You just have to look harder to find it in some people than in others. "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-15-2002 03:23 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, thank you for your sweet reply. I like the little poem you did. You are the "angel", dear friend. "Love makes the world go around" |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hooray Ethel!! Great job and I like it very much. Huggles, Marti |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, Marti. I guess I'm learning a little something, aren't I? "Love makes the world go around" |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ethel, how nice. You did this so well and yes, what a loving person you are. Sometimes our enemies haven't known love of the kind of which you speak...straight from your soul. God Bless.. Warmly, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, lookee here! You went and wrote a senryu---and with a very special message for us all! ~ loving hugs Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, thanks so much for reading my poem and for your heartfelt reply. I sure do appreciate your loving remarks. Thank you very much. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Linda. Yeah, I made an attempt to write one. I love the ones all of you do so well that I thought I'd try. Thanks for your reply. I appreciate it very much. "Love makes the world go around" |
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