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UNC STAR Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 67Hinesville,Ga,USA |
Words cannot express the way I feel, the feelings deep inside that I have. I try to say them but I am speechless you take my breath away. But what can I say, nothing, because your beauty and attitude make you so wonderful and I am lost for words, I don't know what to say. Maybe I can write it to tell you how I feel but if it were up to spoken words the air would be in dismay. What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"the air would be in dismay..." I do understand. gorgeous. |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Interesting format. I liked this poem very much. I look forward to reading a lot more. I hope you enjoy your stay at Pip as much as we are sure to enjoy having you.  Dawn |
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UNC STAR Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 67Hinesville,Ga,USA |
I would like to thank yall for reading my poetry. I hope you to hear for you guys again. What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Jamie, this is wonderfully said, sweet friend, sometimes it is best to waste no words when such special feelings are felt! (smiles) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jamie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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