»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #23
»
Palm Shade
| Open Poetry #23 |
|
Palm Shade |
|
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
|
Palm Shade A palm tree lends its shade to me While watching magic of the sea The clouds make phantoms in the air The sun makes gold of light that’s there. And I am off into a wile A stay onto a protyle Isle And there I search for ecstasy The women of my fantasy No knight no armor, no lance Just a touch of sweet romance A tête-à-tête to sooth my fate An innovate of dreamers state. I love the land of non exist There are no rules or moralists You rule the moment with your mind Without reality to blind The journey is a pleasant one And free to almost everyone. |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Another fine addition to your ever growing collection Fine quality poetry, As always an enjoyable read. Gloom |
||
|
smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
Very nicely woven dream. Lovely flow and rhyme. Much enjoyed. (^_~) Julie |
||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Seymour, this is so lovely, sweet friend, I too just love to rule each moment as being in the warm tropical bayside is the place I want to be! (big huggggssssss) You speak of this beautiful visit so well, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I love the words you use to create your fantasties and the way you weave them all together. Now, that is magic! (ok, hard work and education and natural talent, too) (smiling) So, the magic is in your ability to make it look so easy, and to make the setting of this fantasy sound so appealing. Fun Read. Liked it a great deal. Warm Regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sy.. Enjoyed the trip into fantasyland. ~Morning hugs~ ~Let your heart guide you... |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, Thank you and may your dreams be of equal delight. smitty-j Thank you for the read and nice comment. Noah, Thank you my friend. Pat, Your replies are always a pleasure to read. Thank you. Enchantress Top of the morning to you my dear. Hugs |
||
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ah, Seymour... I think you've just written the definitive poem for daydreamers. *G* I love the land of non exist There are no rules or moralists You rule the moment with your mind Without reality to blind I may not have your palm trees... but I sure do live that verse! *G* I love this!!!! |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you my dear, you are the bud of a rose. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (11-11-2002 09:48 AM).] |
||
|
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Spoken with the heart and mind of Walter Mitty fame. Well done smiles of your wiles.  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
||
|
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mr. Seymour, yet again you have captured my thoughts and put them into the world of your wonderful dreams, feelings and thoughts. Thank you so much, kind Sir, for sharing with us this morning. "Love makes the world go around" |
||
|
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mr. Seymour, yet again you have captured my thoughts and put them into the world of your wonderful dreams, feelings and thoughts. Thank you so much, kind Sir, for sharing with us this morning. "Love makes the world go around" |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...to seek the scene of foreign shore just one last time in ever more... |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T.,.......there, it's saved! I visit that world often, and I care not whether thou hast naught--no lance, no armor--It matters not a wit since you be best at woo! EA |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And I am off into a wile A stay onto a protyle Isle And there I search for ecstasy The women of my fantasy No knight no armor, no lance Just a touch of sweet romance A tête-à-tête to sooth my fate An innovate of dreamers state. I love the land of non exist There are no rules or moralists You rule the moment with your mind Without reality to blind ====================================== *smiling at your wile and "tête-à-tête"* and this will be my waay cool line for the day.... A stay onto a protyle Isle have Randy saddled and ready to go...pick me up on your way to Shangri-La... I do so love walking barefoot on your beaches of understand.    No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, garysgirl A double thanks to you, my sweet. Sunshine Yes, Yess. Earth Angel Love your reply. JM, Randys steady and ready to go. Meet you tonight at the first star glow. WWRS |
||
|
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful Sey as always a joy to read Charisma |
||
|
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
The only problem with that for me, Is that I want more than I can see So true though Sy, and I am so jealous, what I would give to see a palm tree, it is raining buckets here today. Nicely done my friend. Hi, Isabel |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma Thank you for the beautiful. Sharon, And I agree. But they do have lots of shopping there. Iz says hi back. |
||
|
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart, you know how my soul reacts to this utter beauty of thought. How is it do you think that daily you come up with the utter beauty’s. the quality is divine and I love this utterly utterly A fata morgana, a mist of make believe A fairy castle whose spells you weave A mirage that wavers in the air mistily By the power of your words all this I see Don’t stop the magic you do so well These tales of wonder that you tell Talk to me about the fairies dew Speak to me of dragons’ fire anew Lead me to the place of your inner voice Show me where dreamers find a choice Within the fantasy of words you show The place of magic where I wish to go Never a thought of what does he see You reveal it all within your poetry Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire Thy coolness and they balm Let sense be dumb let flesh retire Speak through the earthquake wind and fire [This message has been edited by Marsha (11-12-2002 08:54 PM).] |
||
|
Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Sounds like a paridise... Not a woman's paridise, but if I were a boy (and you guys know I'm not) I would really want to be there... Great poem "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
||
|
Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Now if it were male models.... "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, You are a marvel at replies. It seems you hold the string of the poem and fly with it. Thank you my dear. Wind, Transition is a hope of the poem. Why not inter change. LOL |
||
|
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart you offer me the kite and naturally I’m swept in flight to the place that you keep in dream to the world where wishes are seen You are an amazing writer darling man, and I love each one that I get the chance to read and respond to.  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
||
|
majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
opposite coast for me but i get you perfectly. the form really cinched it. -majnu |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Thank you again, majnu Thank you for the read and comment. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
