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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I penned a poem late last night, I slaved and toiled to get it right, With flowing meter and perfect rhyme, A work of art, an ode sublime, Editing here, and editing there, A wordsmith surgeon, I worked with great care, And then the bonanza, my poem complete, I gazed in amazement at my odistic fete, Poetic perfection straight from my muse, Alas then it hit me, the darnawful news, I'd neglected to do something, something so vital, I wrote me a poem, without any title. What could I do, I admitted defeat, My only recourse, to hit the delete. [This message has been edited by Tim (11-12-2002 10:34 PM).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
hee hee, definately noooooo  really enjoyed this |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Okay, although that made absolutely nnooooo sense to me, i still enjoyed it (wink wink, you could have just added a title...) Oh well, you work in mysterious ways... "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO if I had a dime for every girl who said that to me in high school, I would be a millionaire rather than a reclusive, relatively unknown poet, (and it is pretty bad when even your relatives don't know you) Wind, Let me be Frank with you, well, since my name is Tim, let me be Tim with you. If I made sense, I'd Shirley be, well, I'd Tim be still, but that is beside the point. Actually, that was beside but and is, but it is of no consequence since I believe I have conclusively established I have no sense. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tim, I think you had off one day too many, but in this instance, on you, it looks good. I was going to say "What Helen said" but since you take such offense at a no, all I guess that is left for me is YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! |
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