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On the Wind
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On the Wind |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
On the Wind Breezes from the bay Whisper your sweet name to me Gazing at the stars. ...dedicated to my soulmate..... [This message has been edited by scorpio (10-14-2002 08:54 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I knew you would hear My whispers on the night wind ~ As you watched the bay. Congratulations Scorpio on your 100th post! ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So pure, like the white light of the stars themselves. ThisDiamond |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Sweet poem ~Wind~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
dolphins sing softly waves foam with bellows of hues every time you speak  (sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yay, CONGRATULATIONS ON 100, we are all so proud of you, God Bless You, may true love always fill your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Beautiful! Also let me extend my congrats on your 100th post.  Dawn |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thanks for taking the time to read my attempt at senyru...It's a challenge to write this way for me...but rewarding when it works... thank you James, Enchantress, ThisDiamond, Wind, Mistletoe Angel and DawnG for your kind words...yes Enchantress I'm sure your name is on the wind... ...believe what your heart feels... [This message has been edited by scorpio (10-15-2002 02:47 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Breezes from the bay..." I can feel them, I can smell them---and I have a weakness for alliteration! tee-hee Lovely EA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
now this one I like a lot Charisma |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
In the wind I hear Calling sweetly, a kitty "Come kick me, Long John." grrr - I can't help it! Yours was sweeter than mine, but my tapping toes got the better of me. |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Excellent. I am partial to minimalist poetry. paladin |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
scorpio - like your poem... Breezes I feel on my face, with the fragrance of her... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Scorpio, this is very good. I like this type poems, too. These are wonderful teachers here, aren't they? Love To All, Ethel/garysgirl |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Yes...Earth Angel...the breezes from the bay not only cool but inspire.. Glad you liked it Charisma... I've never heard a cat on the bay, LongJhnAg..but there could be a first time... Paladin...these things are a challenge... Bill... yes her fragrance pleasures me too.. Garysgirl...I'm learning to like writing in this form... Again, thank you all for your kind words...I'm honoured that you took time to read "On the Wind". |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Baylight and sleek seals bark harbor into twilight Counting stars with you |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Lady in White...I gave up counting the stars...I just sit and enjoy them...immeasurably ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enchantress just came back to say she is so happy this was popped back up again...lovely...simply lovely.  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
 Thank you Enchantress.... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Enjoyable read! Don't pay any attention to LngJhnAg. I suspect he is a kitty lover at heart. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well, right or wrong....not a matter, cause this says tenderly quite a lot...enjoyed.. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Midnightsun...LngJhnAg doesn't fool me.... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Thats weird... I read this a really, really long time ago.... Never be normal! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Magnus...glad you enjoyed it... Thanks Wind...again... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I can feel them and I can smell them; breezes from the bay. Really good job of writing this senyru. Huggles, Marti |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Thanks you for sharing your wonderful work. Poetry is love and love is life. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Marti...I could use warm breezes tonight...winter is blowing cold winds... I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem, Krystopher. |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Enjoyed. Poetry is love and love is life. |
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