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ptwils165
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0 posted 2002-11-29 07:00 PM


I heard the tales she sleeps all day,
eyelids flitter with the rain;
Memories, her lullabies insane.

Her vision circles with the light,
blinks in elementary sight
of days that swallow teardrops from her eyes.

Rumours turn her symptoms worse
as mind and body reap the curse;
lethargy her daily-failing nurse.

Acronyms and allergies, jabs she can’t recall,
sympathies to nothingness and insult start to fall -
Alison sleeps.
And now the rain is gone.



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1 posted 2002-11-29 08:21 PM




(big huggssssssss) This is such a powerful heartwrenching poem, sweet friend, I send many angel hugs out to you and Alison, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-12-01 01:30 PM



Very powerful Pete.  I received a number of images from this...from young to old, and inbetween...

cherrylips
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3 posted 2002-12-01 01:40 PM


I almost creid when I read this , only hope one day I will write as well as you do , cherrylipsx
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4 posted 2003-05-03 09:26 PM







heartbreaking for certain....

wonder write you are....

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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