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angelswing
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0 posted 2002-11-10 07:30 PM


Colours of life .

Colours of life all around me,
Bright skies fly high above,
Rolling ground bellow my feet,
All around a rainbow of such love .

Dew dripped lushus grasses,
Sparkling rivers lapping soft,
Marshmallow clouds float on by,
A scent of beauty held aloft .

What a view to look upon,
Ever changing before my eyes,
Almost as if running a course,
Intricately woven with my sighs .

Written by Tom Baker .©



'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

[This message has been edited by angelswing (11-10-2002 07:32 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-11-10 07:38 PM




(sigh) Oh Tom, this is soooooo majestic, sweet friend, I imagined myself dancing on the marshmallow clouds and riding unicorns on the shaved ice rainbows, this is heavenly, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tom, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

angelswing
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2 posted 2002-11-10 07:51 PM


Thankyou sweet friend Noah, It has been some time since I've been on the site but I see your kind words and even kinder heart have not changed . I'm glad you enjoyed it, thankyou .
L.of.L. Tom .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

Robert Adamson
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3 posted 2002-11-11 07:03 AM


As this poem is like a flower, I should like to steal it. Thank you. Beautiful.


etoodog

[This message has been edited by Robert Adamson (11-11-2002 07:05 AM).]

angelswing
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4 posted 2002-12-02 12:46 PM


Thankyou very much Robert Adamson; You are kind with your words - In fact i think they are more beautiful than the poem itself .
L.of.L. Tom .
XXX

'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

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