Open Poetry #23 |
Colours of life |
angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Colours of life . Colours of life all around me, Bright skies fly high above, Rolling ground bellow my feet, All around a rainbow of such love . Dew dripped lushus grasses, Sparkling rivers lapping soft, Marshmallow clouds float on by, A scent of beauty held aloft . What a view to look upon, Ever changing before my eyes, Almost as if running a course, Intricately woven with my sighs . Written by Tom Baker .© 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. [This message has been edited by angelswing (11-10-2002 07:32 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Tom, this is soooooo majestic, sweet friend, I imagined myself dancing on the marshmallow clouds and riding unicorns on the shaved ice rainbows, this is heavenly, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tom, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thankyou sweet friend Noah, It has been some time since I've been on the site but I see your kind words and even kinder heart have not changed . I'm glad you enjoyed it, thankyou . L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
As this poem is like a flower, I should like to steal it. Thank you. Beautiful. etoodog [This message has been edited by Robert Adamson (11-11-2002 07:05 AM).] |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thankyou very much Robert Adamson; You are kind with your words - In fact i think they are more beautiful than the poem itself . L.of.L. Tom . XXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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