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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Outpouring I danced within your eyes although I was standing still somehow you pour me out all of me rides in spill to you I become liquid language in thirst you drink me up magically cold turned to warmth when your hand touched the cup I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A delight to drink But you don’t mind if I admire the cup too? Gloom |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Wow. That hit me hard. I'm not sure why, but I'll analyze it, and maybe come back.  Thank you.Kielo According to statistics, a man eats a prune every twenty seconds. I don't know who this fellw is, but I know where to find him. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
i love the way that you can start reading the poem at almost any line and coninue from their in a loop, to find a completely new poem. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Wonderfully written. Just the thought of touching your...errr...that cup makes me want to read it again. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Now, Helen, I like this, too, but not for the same reason all those guys above me do!!HeeHee!! If you've read any of my poems about me and my Gary, you can just imagine what I thought of when I read it. Let's just say that I had very sensual thoughts of me and him. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You do have a way with words ... uh, that's a definition of a poet, isn't it? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Very sexy... and I just noticed that even the form -- I mean LITERALLY, the FORM of the poem is suggestive! Curvalicious.  -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Nice poem. Enjoyed,.. Thank you for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, your heart always flood sout with beautifully delicate thoughts to share, sweet friend, may this holy grail forever reach your lips, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Seems that you have found a new voice lately. Or, maybe I just read better. Ed |
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