Open Poetry #23 |
Warrior of the Ancient World |
ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
His sword gleams in the morning sun, A battle fought and bravely won. A polished shield reflects his heart, His body trained in a deadly art. The blade an extension of his arm, His armour a shell to defend against harm. This fighter of legend now stands tall, Victorious and towering over them all. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
ThunderMage, powerful story of a warrior. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love your warrior tales. Awesome poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
A warrior's blood flows through my veins, so I know what they think and feel, or at least I have a good guess. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Enjoyed! God Bless! THE ARMOR OF GOD: (EPHESIANS 6:10-20) FINALLY MY BRETHREN BE STRONG IN THE LORD AND IN THE POWER OF HIS MIGHT. PUT ON THE WHOLE ARMOR OF GOD THAT YE MAY BE ABLE TO STAND AGAINST THE WILES OF THE DEVIL. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay!!! May the heroes live on and legends never die! (sigh) You bring back these times of great chivalry and might, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liam, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I liked your poem of warriors. It sounded kinda like a story. "Love makes the world go around" |
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dougsbird21 Member
since 2002-11-08
Posts 52London(from TX though) |
nice one....good portrayal of those good old knights in shining armor. Now all we have are police who, without 5 other men with them, can't catch one puny thief! What happened to the days of bravery, chivalry and all that?!?!? |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Yea... back then one knight would face an entire gang by himself. Now we have police who take on one unarmed weakling ten-on-one and the weakling still wins. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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