Open Poetry #23 |
No Picasso |
dougsbird21 Member
since 2002-11-08
Posts 52London(from TX though) |
No Picasso Gentle ribbons of color Ripple all around me Paint wrap me in rainbows Yet somehow I remain pale Indifferent to the differences outside me No change inside Still black and white I long to have some inner brightness A pastel dabbed soul to contain me But it seems I am an artist Whose palette was never filled Write what you feel, not what u think you should feel. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yes, you are the artist and only you can create the colors with the rainbow you unleash from your heart! (sigh) Now go paint a starry night like Van Gogh, yay, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lisa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
intriguing. you did a mighty fine job on this piece, and i thank you for sharing. no one could ever be picasso, but picasso himself. /jen/ what if they gave a war, and nobody came... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
oh, and... i love that smiley. /jen/ what if they gave a war, and nobody came... |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Dip into your color wheel and we will know you when you emerge, trust that we will know you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love this! Your palette is no doubt full; maybe somedays the brush just cannot hold all that lies before it. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
When I read your poems, it seems you have found your true colors. I like your work very much and hope you will continue to share with us. You have a style that is quite unique. Hugs, Marti "I am not afraid of STORMS |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Nice poem.. Enjoyed the read... Thank you for sharing... I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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