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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

0 posted 2002-11-08 04:14 AM



Tell Me True


Hey there girl can ya tell me true
What it was like back then, without the blue
The day you discovered there in that park
A frail old man running from the dark

When innocence did abound in the eyes of child
Before you grew and turned, just a little wild
When you shared your food with a friend anew
Just because you thought ‘twas the thing to do

Hey there girl let me tell you true
You’re still the same, just a little blue
An innocence of heart that’s rare and pure
With an angels look, an angels’ demure

You give the glint of hope through the gloom
That even now, we may yet bloom
For it’s the little things, in little hearts
That shows us all where we need to start

Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets.  ~Arthur Miller

© Copyright 2002 E.T. Meehan - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-11-08 08:10 AM


EagleOne,
posting this 'twas the thing to do and I'm glad you did. There are so many images in this one.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Toerag
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2 posted 2002-11-08 08:14 AM


Hey flighty one...good write....enjoyed...TOE
Connel
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3 posted 2002-11-08 10:57 AM


Good poem.. I enjoyed it a lot.. Thanks for sharing.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-11-08 11:31 AM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this touched my heart as I am saddened to see so many forsake innocence and how our children hold that hope in their hearts and if only we can listen to them the world can be so much graceful! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, always nurture the boy in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eddie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl
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5 posted 2002-11-08 11:45 AM


Eddie, this is beautiful. I love the heart of the "angel" you described. It was a good angel, for sure.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

dgvarner
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6 posted 2002-11-08 01:03 PM


hey there mr meehan...   so much enjoyed this write...you with your big heart telling stories of an angel heart....

say 'hey' to me someday..eh?  

take care eagle!

hugs, g

"dont cry because its over, smile because it happened...!"  -unknown

EagleOne
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7 posted 2002-11-10 03:58 PM


Kethry ~ yes, always many images my friend, thanks for stoping by!

Toerag ~ Good to know you enjoyed, thanks.

Connel ~ Thank you for reading!

Noah ~ Perhaps one day it shall be so!

Garysgirl ~ oh yes, most definitely good!

g ~ hey to you too! Glad you enjoyed my friend, you take  care!

Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets.  ~Arthur Miller

passing shadows
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8 posted 2002-12-26 03:01 AM


how'd I miss this? I'm glad I get to go back into the pages and snatch some up
EagleOne
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9 posted 2002-12-26 04:06 AM


I'm glad you found me my friend, take care!
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