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waiting for the snow to fall
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waiting for the snow to fall |
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kruser Junior Member
since 2002-11-08
Posts 11 |
Low light, mood is right but somehow nothing is right Candles burning, and i am burning, again Burnt incense and lost innocence I sit here drinking, thinking of you I pour another and hit repeat, and listen to this song again, and again, and again and i wish it were you i was drinking It's been awhile, longer than it seems Sometimes i still feel your body next to mine breathing softly, breathing me, breathing you But i've been walking alone lately, and when i reach out to grab your hand, it's not there You're not here It's getting cold out, and i am getting cold they say the snow will be falling soon, and i am falling out, falling in, and i just keep walking,..........and waiting |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Welcome to Passions... I like this poem a great deal. It says a lot. With Warm Rgards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) Oh Kruser, this is such a heartachingly touching debut, sweet friend, I wish for love to soon hold your hand and bring light to your heart forevermore, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kruser, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kruser, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I wrote a poem with a similar title, waiting for the snow to fall, so I had to peek in here and read. This is so lonely in it's read. A sad but lovely write. [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (11-08-2002 08:29 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Please check you email for a special greeting! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY !!! I hope you'll like it here. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more of your work. Thanks for sharing. "Love makes the world go around" |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Welcome! Extremely poignant piece. Some great lines here. Great title, too. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions. I very much enjoyed my first reading of you, and looking forward to more. Karilea |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!! Your going to love it here.. I know i do.. Poeple here are so nice. and they help you out so much. Whenever you need help,.. Make sure you ask someone. I enjoyed the read.. Thanks for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Wow... Welcome to Passions, and wow... The last stanza was amazing. Thank you. Kielo According to statistics, a man eats a prune every twenty seconds. I don't know who this fellw is, but I know where to find him. |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
excellent entrance into passions.  you did a nice job on this piece - i'm anxious to see more. thanks for sharing. /jen/ what if they gave a war, and nobody came... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome. You pour out heartache very well. Hope to read more from you. |
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