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Dream 27 |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA 
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There once was a time Reason provided mates With cues for one another And evenings of much love Now that humanity has few dimensions It's awful to remain the same One makes the promise One breaks in need Others quench their motives Nevertheless everliving Beckons a severable prudence To cherish and hold The pure bold forever untold etoodog |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I believe I know where you're coming from, and it gets harder and harder to take people's words at face value any more... Someone once defined a cynic as a disillusioned idealist, and there may be some truth to that... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No D- here...just the comment that we are born, filled with hope... and we mold it ourselves. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very deep writing. There is so much to think about, isn't there? Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Robert, I too agree with Mark's knowledge he shared of what a cynic is, I truly feel ideas can be conveyed and mixed with aesthetics and I only hope the disillusioned can find that light on the next page! (sigh) This is well-said., sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Robert, I love to rad your poetry. It gives the reader so many thoughts to ponder. Thanks for sharing. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Very thoughtful and thought-provoking. Thank you, I enjoyed very much. Kielo According to statistics, a man eats a prune every twenty seconds. I don't know who this fellw is, but I know where to find him. |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
the title really caught my attention. and i'm glad i checked it out. i must say it was a good write, thank you for sharing. oh, and never settle for a d- minus.  /jen/ what if they gave a war, and nobody came... |
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