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Quiet Heartbeats.....
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Quiet Heartbeats..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Quiet heartbeats in the dark whisper I need you, want you Memories soft November reminders falling from the sky grant me peace Comfort for my soul while a smile plays across my lips repeating your name and I can’t help but to wonder if you weren’t out there somewhere with quiet heartbeats remembering……. ~SEA~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely SEA..as only you can write... with such a delicate touch... ~Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Great poem. Enjoyed. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA~ This is so lovely and tender. It simply whispers. Beautifully done, my friend.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ah... those Autumn Leaves... I believe they bare reminders for us all... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ah... those Autumn Leaves... I believe they bear reminders for us all... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" [This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (11-07-2002 09:38 PM).] |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
"Quiet heartbeats in the dark whisper" So, this is how a heart beats, it whispers... Thank you. etoodog |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is softly beautiful, sweet friend, I am sure your love is always beating for you too whenever he's away, this is touching, I love it, may your heart forever beats with his melody, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
My heart is quickened in its pace, for want of your dear sweet embrace. Lovely, my friend Hugs |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Now that is a simply beautiful thought and feeling...excellently written, thanx Sue. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very peaceful feel |
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