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An inner thought
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An inner thought |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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That kiss, which makes the spirit burn The dreams that sleep, to wake The keepsake that does often stray To not forget, or love forsake |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Rick - Very succinct, and delivered with a perfect rhythm to the words. I read it more than once. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
LngJhnAg Thank you for the reply, I am trying in a few words to tell a story. Nice to hear from you. Sincerely Rick |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This does read very smoothly, and you did say a lot in a few lines of rhyming and rhythme. I liked this a great deal. Warm Regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A wonderful concentrate of truth and love. Bravo. ThisDiamond |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Pat, thanks for the reply, it is much appreciated. Have a great day. ThisDiamond, nice to hear from you, thanks for the reply, again appreciated. Sincerely Rick |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Rick, This was wonderful in fact a treasure, very nice to be reading your work and if I have not yet welcomed you to Passions? So very nice that you are here. Love, Cerenity |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh to dream like this~ Less is more, and simplicity is even better. I'm in awe of a poet who can say so much in so few words.... as you've done very well. Good poetry Rick~ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rick, this is beautiful. I wish I could do this... say so much in so few words. You really get your point across, too. Thanks for sharing. ~~With Love And Hugs To All~~ |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
hmm that's deep. very eternal thought expressed here... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You said quite a lot with seeming ease a Keepsake 'tis a welcomed please... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Gently thoughtful write....much enjoyed ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Rick Your words always leave me in awe and this is no exception. By the way, thank you so much for the comment you left on my post. I was deeply touched by your words. I hope all is well with you. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I do believe that you have met your goal.. Short, yet encompassing many thoughts... Nicely done.. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rick, your inner thoughts should become public more often. No scratch that; I hate to have to wait in a queue to view succinct and passionate poetry. So write more often and just email them to me okay! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you said much here |
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