Open Poetry #23 |
John and Me |
Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
In a moment We became The same Inseparable Children We once were In a moment We became Julie The Protector John The Protectee As all the years In between Faded away For a Moment ****************************** |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem reflects the relationship I have had with my younger brother. Thank you for this wonderful, and meaningful poem! EA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Julie, this is said so very well, sweet friend, relationships are meant to be twisted sometimes but as long as trust and faith exists it will endure! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Julie...This poem so effortlessly embodies the heart of love. Enjoyed this so very much. ***Ivy Rose |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
The bond that remains, and lasts ever. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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clumsy Member
since 2002-10-10
Posts 106canada. |
lovely. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Lovely poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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