Open Poetry #23 |
.....Who I am...... |
secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Who I am Asking my self Who I am Feeling my heart confusing Don’t know what I want What I need What I feel Hating my self for while Feeling jealous Who I am What I really want What’s wrong with me The heart is bleeding and bleeding Needing once to immigrate Who I am Am I just a silly body Without a soul Wishing to live without a mind To stop thinking and remembering The pain memory The old story Who I am My heart is wondering While the eyes are shading a tears When the life will end When we can stop breathing How our destiny will be When our heart will leave his throbs Who I am Who I am inside This is the word I am asking To reach the answer of my wonders Needing something But what I am here now Can you see me now Can you see how I am still a live But who I am can you tell me Did any body feels like I feel Who I am Why I have to be as I am Questions always in mind But normally we get used At least I am still here as I am The same situation of knowing who I am Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
A lot of thought went into this. I like it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Secretlife, I ask myself these questions all the time. I liked this write. Dawn |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
quote: The heart wouldn't wonder and the eyes wouldn't cry, with out a soul. Painful words penned on this page, and if it's true to your life and not just a write, I hope and pray that you find peace for yourself. Hugs to you.... ~Sheri |
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