Open Poetry #23 |
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Cold Dog? levity |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Cold Dog? cold outside warm in here sitting in robe gown and thermals I wanna go to church I’m sure I do but wish could just go as I am all comfy hair mussed dog next door all kinds o’ energy popping him around the yard in his altogether rolling in the frost all lazy tossed and I sitting here still wiggling fingers on the keys keeping lazy with so much ease wonder if... if I could go out there in my underwear like dog would I find vitality beyond the laze that feeds me now guess I would or die of frostiness profound “Whata hound!” happy-go-lucky on the ground ©November 3, 2002 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is really cute, Virginia. I liked it a lot. I could just see the dog jumping around playfully. Thanks for sharing. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Virginia, have you been touched by a frost lately? This is cute...Brrrrrrrr.. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Dogs have a normal temp of 106 Fahrenheit. That's what helps them be so comfortable in the cold. Which makes me envy them cause I wanna role around like that in the snow sometimes too! LOL Enjoyed! God bless! |
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Connel![]()
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
LOL.. Well. it made me laugh in a spot.. But its a good poem. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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quietlydying![]() ![]()
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
this was a very visual piece, and you did an impressive job with it. nicely done. and i guess i never really did know a dog's average body temperature, but it's good to know. ![]() /jen/ what if they gave a war, and nobody came... |
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