Open Poetry #23 |
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In Days of Yore |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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~ * ~ In days of yore, on distant shore, Merry minstrels made their way, Blowing flutes, and plucking lutes, 'Twas a fanciful display. As jesters pranced, their merry dance, Children laughed with mirthful glee, For what they saw, filled them with awe, To behold such pageantry. As all drew nigh, with spirits high, To join this revelry, Dogs nipped at heel, as children squeal, 'Twas a merry sight to see. Fresh baked bread, filled their head, As villagers gathered 'round, Vendors shout, "Come buy my stout! It's the best brew in the town!" Both knight and serf, gave of their worth, To honor one another, Come once a year, in this time of cheer, Each became, the other's brother. As village folk, did laugh and joke, In joyful merriment, All was well, in their derry-o-dell, On this day of sweet content. ~ * ~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-06-2002 06:42 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A merry dance! Enjoyable read, Linda! Thank you! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very enjoyable read Linda. This is a delightful treasure. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sunshine ~ Thank you for thanking me! It doesn't seem to matter how often I reread a poem before I post it, I'm always overlooking typos. I changed a few of the words as well. Nothing like rewriting a poem after it's been posted! egads! Glad you still enjoyed the original version before I made these edits! haha EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna ~ One of the things that I enjoy about writing poetry, is that I seldom know what I am going to write about. I may have an idea in mind, but I usually end up with a poem that came out of nowhere. It's kind of a surprise to me what I'll end up with. Such was the case with this poem. ---where on earth did this one come from?!? tehe Linda |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
hmmmm..quite a quaint little lore. Loved it! ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
WhiteRose ~ Well, it's not exactly "lore", 'cause I sort of made it up. I don't know if there ever was such a day where knight and serf joined as brothers in blitheful harmony. tehe EA |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Poetic license sweet Angel, you can write what you like, and now it's lore. ![]() |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Yay!!! Oh Linda, I wish I could have lived back then just for a while and enjoyed those merry times, though of course I still am happy here too despite the sadness in the world with you and all my friends and Joanna! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton P.S: Look back on Page 3, you inspired a special poem I wrote, yay! ![]() "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I enjoyed reading this very much. This is a wonderful and delightful poem. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a fun read! Much enjoyed...made me want to dance a jig! ~Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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paladin![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
I belong to a medievel re-enactment group known as the Society for Creative Anachornism.It is wonderfull to get way from the present age and go back to when Honor,chivalry and courtesy was the rule not the exception.Vivat the dream. paladin |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
This is probably one of your better poems gal.... |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed this very much, EA... it's fantastic! *S* |
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majnu![]()
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
a merry dance indeed. i don't know if you used an old form, or invented this for your own, but it was done very well. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
WhiteRose ~ You mean to tell be there are two of us!?! lol EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Noah ~ I often fantasize about the days of old--or is it just past-life recall?!? tehe ~ Sweet prince you and I would have been in our element....... Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enchantress ~ Thank you! Actually I have just rewritten several of the lines and I believe it is much improved. EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Paladin ~ It must be so much fun to be a member of a medievel re-enactment group. I just went back into my poem and fixed it up it several places and rewrote some lines. It seems to flow more smoothly now. I'm glad you enjoyed it even before my edits! hehe EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Sir Toe ~ Thank you! I love reading and fantasizing about those bygone days. I have even written several Elizabethan sounding songs and insturmentals for the guitar. I find that sort of music both comforting and stimulating. I'm pleased that it pleased you, but I have since gone back and rewritten parts to make it flow better. EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Suthern Belle ~ ---"Fantastic" was a very enthusiastic and much appreciated reply! ~ Thank you fair damsel! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Majnu ~ I do not know whether this is a recognized form or not. It just came out that way. I have actually gone back in and rewritten some of the lines to make them flow better. Thanks for reading and replying! EA |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Dear TwistedSister, I enjoyed this much and I loved taking a stroll back in time with you. I think your flow and rhyme are grand. hugs, TwistedSoul (heehee) Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Connel![]()
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Thank you Earth Angel for posting that lovely poem.. I really liked it.. Ill keep an eye out for more of your poetry.. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Linda, superbly written, (mouth full of bread and ale)....I could smell the bread baking, hear the children laughing... Very nicely done...thanx.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Marti ~ We may be "twisted sisters" lol, but there is no way that your soul is! haha --and thanks for joining me for that stroll back in time! ~ hugs, dear one Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear "Mag"estic One ~ Sounds like you really got into the experience of this poem--and time! Your response was very gratifying and I thank you! EA |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Linda, I love this.... everything else has been said. ...cept, more, more please.... ![]() Hugs To You, Warmly, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Connel ~ Sorry, I hadn't seen your reply---which was very complimentary! Thank you! It adds fuel to my writing fire! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Pat ~ You flatter me with your words...and I want "more, more, please"! tehe Thank you! ~ May you forever be young at heart... Linda |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, sweet Earthy Angel, you did it again...had me seeing you and little chidren dancing around, laughing and playing. Made me want to get up from here and cut a litle jig...HeeHee!! Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel ~ And I would just love for you to join us and dance about with carefree abandon! Linda |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Linda~ A wonderful magical poem of frolic & revelry. Enjoyed...Paul |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Rather like an old fashioned carnival, Linda I enjoyed it very much ![]() Lyra |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Paul ~ What a pleasant surprise to see this poem seeing the light of day again!--and I am so pleased that you enjoyed reading the fruits of my active imagination! ~ May your days be full of fun, love, and laughter! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Madame Chipmunk ~ Do you know that I love writing and seeing "Madame Chipmunk"! Your name always puts a smile on my face! It's as adorable as you are! Thank you for your thoughtful reply and I'm glad you enjoyed my little fantasy! ~ Any magical world is but a thought away Linda |
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