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Not a wasted breath
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Not a wasted breath |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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I attempted my own challenge,just to see if it was too hard. It is possible, I could even make it rhyme. The challenge was a poem with 10 lines, no repeated words and at least 5 words per line. What night of purest memory Sings the song with saddest melody I wish that you could see me now Sun shines and I'm wondering how Last wispered breath makes haste No wasted life, no taste, A tounge is bitter greif dying trees, without a leaf Mising your love's part inside Now like my soul has died Whew!, that tired me, I'm going to bed  [This message has been edited by Wind (11-05-2002 08:03 PM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I think you did a wonderful job. I enjoyed this a lot. Warm Regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You met your own challenge well worth the effort given... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Liz, you have done a wonderful job with your own challenge, I love it, I hope all is alright now for you are so deserving of loves happiness, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
cool. my reply to this challenge is up after this message. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz, you did a very good job at meeting your own challenge. I enjoyed. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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