Open Poetry #23 |
A Flower's Cry |
Etcetera New Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 3Maryland |
**I'm new to Passions. I hope you will like my poems, as I've enjoyed reading many of yours.** A Flower's Cry... The storm is over, the streets are wet The clouds have cleared, the rainbow has set The sky is filled as all the birds fly Yet alone and lost, lies A Flower's Cry To see a daughter, a promise has been made Daddies little girl waits, under the summer trees shade But something isn't right as time passes by Crushed, limp and bleeding, A Flower's Cry Two vows, two hearts, ‘till death do us part Love disappeared, a marriage doomed from the start No need to ask, I see it in your eyes Somewhere inside dwells, A Flower's Cry Here today, gone tomorrow A life of love, A life of sorrow Taken away, no need to ask why It shouts it screams, A Flower's Cry… ~Kymela~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am enjoying your posts and await more. Very well done. |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Welcome to passions.... Your poems is so lovely.. Very nice thoughts and words...Waiting to read more.. Hugess Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi! Welcome to Passions! This poem is sweet and yet it is also so sad. You spoke softly--with such gentleness. ~ Enjoy your new family of kindred spirits! Earth Angel |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Soft and beautiful, and so very sad. An excellent write. Welcome to Passions |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Kymela, this is soooooo beautiful yet so sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all the children whose promises are broken and I wish for the rainbow to come and fill all their hearts with compassion and content! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we are all so happy you're here as you are a very special friend to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kymela, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, I'm going to enjoy reading you... thank you for this... looking forward to more... Karilea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You write with such a gentle touch... I am enjoying reading you.. ~Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Wellcome to passions.We have to be reminded how much divorce hurts the children.They think if mommy and daddy stop loving each other will they stop loving me. paladin |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
Welcome to Passions! I really hope to see more of you... This was outstanding and I enjoyed it thoroughly! Laura "I have seen what a laugh can do. It can transform almost unbearable tears into something bearable, even hopeful." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions. I really enjoyed your poem and look forwards to much more. thanks for sharing with us. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Kymela, I enjoyed this sad poem very much. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing and another big welcome to Passions from me Dawn |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Kymela Welcome to Passions and I hope you enjoy your time in this warm and loving environment. Your words were nothing short of beautiful and were written with flair. I'll look forward to reading more. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
You have a magnetic charm with these words, so true.I feel them deeply. Thank you. etoodog |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
A touch of wisdom, a touch of sorrows, a touch of healing for such tomorrows. Your words give HOPE the strength needed, well done. |
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