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AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

0 posted 2002-11-07 03:57 AM

Why are all my poems so sugar-fairy sweet?
What happened to the blood, the bore, the bruised and battered feet?
This is just a plastic show job; not really my release.
I'm just pretending to write love songs.
I was lying- I don't care.
I'm glad I never told the truth.
It wasn't truth that brought you here.
But I need to re-remember me.
My face, in forever, I have not seen.
What reality lost, I found in my dreams.
Hold fast! Feathers fly far on the softest breeze.
Tomorrow, please take me away
so, today won't mean a thing.
We'll trade all our sins
for Angel's blessed wings,
when tomorrow does take us away...

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

A. L. Becker
Member

since 2002-09-06

Posts 167
San Francisco, California

1 posted 2002-11-07 04:10 AM

bastinado of love?

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

2 posted 2002-11-07 04:33 AM

I had to look bastinado up in the dictionary (LOL) cool word. I'll have to use that one...

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-11-07 04:33 AM

Oh yes...very nice...James

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

4 posted 2002-11-07 05:30 AM

Ahhhhhh..... a few words from James.
Thank you!

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

5 posted 2002-11-07 06:58 AM

personally i read the blood and gore first but i seem to be one of few

Take a good look at my face
Well, don't my smile look out of place
look a little closer its easy to trace
The tracks of my tears

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

6 posted 2002-11-07 09:47 AM

Krissie, I am glad to see you posting again. I like this a great deal
Your talant just amazes me....

Got your note, you, mine?

This is thought provoking and I will go re-read it again.

Keep up the good work...hope you can continue.

Lots of Hugs to You,
Love ya,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

7 posted 2002-11-07 12:42 PM

Thanks to you, walter and nan for repliying.

much love all
~Krissie

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

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