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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Lingering Words spoken when hurt linger. They hang in the air... Only adding to despair. Like a sharply cut finger. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Scorpio, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I have experienced this crisis so many times before, where it all feels like icicles dripping over me just waiting to fall and pierce my heart! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to you and hope all is alright sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, and make that the most innocent cut of all, usually from a paper-thin slice... Very good, Scorpio...very good! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Noah...you describe the feeling perfectly...cold piercing pain...heavy with remorse ...believe what your heart feels... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Twenty or less AND rhyming! Bravo! -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Yes Sunshine...words said in anger do surprise and hurt the most innocent of loves.. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Scorpio, such truth you have spoken. It would be so much better if everyone would put their brain to work before they put their mouth into action. The tongue is such an unruly member. "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-08-2002 04:02 PM).] |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Ethel...I'm the first to plead guilty to unruly tongue... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Mark...I have to fess up...I wasn't thinking about twenty or less...*S* ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Scorpio, first of all..I have to agree with Mark. Great twenty or less! And in rhyme as well! As to poem content...yes, words can hurt, deeply~ Just remember, actions speak much louder!  Forgiveness is the first step in healing. Well done poet sir. ~Hugs~  ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
You're most welcome Enchantress...my actions will increase in volume...trust me!! I will do my best to earn forgiveness. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Nice poem,.. Enjoyed.. Thank you for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Connel..I appreciate your kind comments... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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