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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-08 12:00 PM

Sand Castles

I heard the whispers
of the wind
the sounds that
forever had penned
a grain of sand
began all time
the earth in motion
with constant rhyme
breathes pendulumed air
swings so free
moves back and forth
attracted to gravity
the push and pull
changeless flow of ride
water caressing earth
with kissing tide
upon these shores
touched by my hand
rebuilding a castle
made of sand

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (11-08-2002 12:44 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-11-08 12:02 PM

Beautiful imagery

Cold hands means a warm heart

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-11-08 12:37 PM

absolutely beautiful writing, Helen. I miss the ocean and beaches of MD of my youth...and I never was able to go to one when I use to visit my Mother in FT.Lauderdale.
*s
M

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-11-08 09:43 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this had me thinking of me as a little boy making sand castles and then rebuilding them again! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

4 posted 2002-11-08 09:54 PM

brings back fond memories of summers at Old Orchard, Maine..the ocean tide and watching my footprints disappear.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-11-08 10:25 PM

This is lovely, evokes lots of images and thoughts.
Sandra

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-11-09 12:17 PM

Helen, I love sand castles. I loved the way you built this one with words. Thanks for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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