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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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A petal riding on the wind Unknowing where will fall A prisoner to the call of fate And dizzied by it all |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I enjoyed this as well. Very nice.  |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Rick, I love this. It is super terrific. Every time I re-read it I grin. I especially like the last line. You captured so much with so few words. I am keeping this. Thanks, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Nice poems... Hugess Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rick, I love the way you can put so much into such few words. It takes a lot of talent to do that. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Rick, I just love this, sweet friend, what I got out of this vision was of someone yearning to wonder when he or she can grasp that tantalizes one and be with the wind, as in fly free! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rick, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I like how this poem can speak to anyone. Thank you. etoodog |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
WhiteRose, again thank you for your reply. regards2you, dear Pat, thank you my dear friend, you gave me a grin and a bit a a big head with your reply, thanks for the comments. secretlife, again thank you, I hope you will keep reading and relying. garysgirl, thank you for this reply, I hope I can again capture your time and share but a moment with words that speak. Mistletoe Angel, Noah, thanks for all your wonderful replies, you have the beautiful heart and the song that sings of love, all your comments are much appreciated and remembered. Robert, I am glad that it has spoken to you and I hope you will hear from me again, you reply is much enjoyed, thank you. Sincerely Rick |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
What a lovely picture! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Rick for so few word this says so much. I think you expressed each new day we have beautifully. Thanks, Juls |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~Aren't we all?,...this is nice, very nice, so glad I read. *Peace. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a 'cuty' Rick!!! Neeraja |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Elan, thanks for the reply, I hope to paint many more for you to read. Juls, nice to hear from you, thanks for the reply, I wrote it as it felt, I am glad that you could relate. Alicia, I am sure we are and dizzy as hell, thanks for the reply, much appreciated. Neeraja, thanks for the read and reply. Thank you to all, have a great day, catch up soon. Sincerely Rick. |
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