Open Poetry #23 |
What I do? |
Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
You're the heh! And I'm the ha! You the rumba I the Cha! Cha! Cha! Me the stick and you the stump. I the rib and you the rump! You are desert I am rain I the nerve and You the pain I am meow! and you are woof! You the basement I the roof! I am tick and you are tack! I am chest and you are back. I be youth and you be age Why your face be in a rage? What I say is what I see! Why you don be punchin me? I the tick and you the tack. Why you swingin that there bat? Where the door I wanna leave Donta make my mama grieve. What I say to make you mad? What I say was not that bad! |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Like the old song "You send me, you thrill me, honest you do." I could happily read a whole book from you. Thank you. etoodog |
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furlong Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 129 |
"You the nerve and I the pain" Hey! Insiteful writing Good bless |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Thanks for the feedback. I saw this scenario constantly as I was growing up. It always ended the same way. My father asking what he had done wrong and my mother telling him and he denying it. Round and around and around! Made me dizzy. Didn't seem to affect them none! LOL! Glad you enjoyed! God Bless! |
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