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Thank you, Mark
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Thank you, Mark |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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for Janet Upon the shoring sands, a message on the beach made with carving stick. "Thank you, Mark." A mention to a saint dragged through cutting streets? A stab of the surreal, thanking letters' forms? Does someone bear that name near this plain of sand? The water does not share and fades the mystery. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Does someone bear that name near this plain of sand? ============================== yeppers...my bestest beach buddy claims that name  Mikey... yer so kewl ...  thank you to you too...your genuine joy of my getting to see the ocean is so sweet... I know you understand...your poetry of the ocean serves proof. No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
bsquirrel, methinks this imprint on sand will last for eons. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Janet, The picture that touched me the most was the moth "butterfly slippers" stencil being lapped at by the waves. But I couldn't get a poem out of it.  Thanks again for sharing so much of yourself. Kethry, Thank you. I had fun with this poem, even if it doesn't seem so. Mikey |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Mikey I am sure this touched both JM and Mark as much as it did me. There is no greater bond than love and friendship, and you have shown yours for JM through your words. Lovely write. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you, Gentle Spirit. I'm glad you were able to get something out of this poem. |
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