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break not |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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Break not this heart that beats still strong, just try with truth to see That years can often change our thoughts, that hearts should all be free Be happy for the moments that do come with angels kiss For if you break this tender heart, one day its love you’ll miss |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I can't think of anything that would improve on this, Rick. It's lovely!  |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Damn it rick!.. Stop writing all the good poems!... Good job rick. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Poet deVine, thanks for this wonderful reply, it is much appreciated indeed. Connel, great to hear from you, thanks for the terrific complement, it gave me a good smile. Sincerely Rick |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rick, this is beautiful...and in such few words. I sure do wish I could do that. Thanks for sharing. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Lovely lines, sweet rimes and wishing you every thing else you may need. Thank you. etoodog |
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