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Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

0 posted 2002-11-04 07:35 PM

Beauty and danger
Like drops of Mercury,
Shatters like silver rain
On a glass Mellody,
A silver trumpet, smooth as oil
and sweet as honey
Like aluminum foil,
And some types of money
A river in winter is almost clear,
The shimmering ball drops
On the last night of the year,

[This message has been edited by Wind (11-04-2002 07:36 PM).]

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-11-04 07:36 PM

Good, Good, Good... Hope to see another of your poems.. Infact.. im gonna search for em.. =)

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-11-04 08:41 PM

Geewillickers! This is awesome dear Wind!

EA

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-11-04 08:48 PM

Very very pretty....enjoyed the read.
~Hugs~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-11-04 09:58 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, this is as sheer as silver! (kiss on cheek) I could see pieces of Mercury dropping like marbles reading this, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2002-11-04 10:00 PM

Awesome images here. You have a clever thought and write...Enjoyed.
ThisDiamond

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

6 posted 2002-11-04 10:03 PM

Thanks everyone. I play trumpet but it isn't silver... Sigh.... But I am first chair, which is what enspired me to write this.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2002-11-05 12:00 PM

Liz, this is really neat. I love the way you did the rhyme in
the poem. It seemed to have a melody.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

8 posted 2002-11-05 12:29 PM

Nice imagery everywhere in this poem and hard to get a hold of an emotion. I really liked the beginning. "Beauty and danger
Like drops of Mercury," Thank you.

etoodog

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