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Lacy Dawn
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Lacy Dawn |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Lacy Dawn darkness found itself pulled back curtained by the window of a lacy dawn delicately woven from edges spun forming a new day newness dripped dyeing edges of sky colors tangling peach and navy blue as moon and sun danced in unison braiding loops of time altering strings of night tying them to the cloth of day I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (11-04-2002 06:59 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
'newness dripped dyeing edges of sky colors" How do you do this? You make it seem so easy, but I know better! I love a tye-died sky. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Your words inspire even the dullest mind to awaken from its slumber and to ignite with a collage of vivid sights and sounds for one to enjoy all day long. So for this Miss Helen I Thank you Thomas |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, you have such a wonderful way with words that you can turn "darkness" to beautiful, brilliant colors. Thanks for sharing your talents, sweet friend. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smles) Oh Helen, I just love this, sweet friend, you always paint the dawn with bright sherbets from your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ This is certainly a beautiful offering from your pen~ It has a tendency to like me VERY MUCH~ Beautifully ... beautifully written~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
It made me remeber a house I stayed in as a child. I vaugely remeber it, but I think of the lacy dawn. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
How do you make suck great poems? I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Helen...Much enjoyed the read. ~Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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