Open Poetry #23 |
Of The Light |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
O Goddess of the golden light wherein the Elves and Faeries play. O woman of this waking flight whose whispers softly come to stay. Where does the love of mortal man find the heart of one maiden’s dwell? To spring and dance on whitest sand and feel the pulse beat linger tell. To touch the cheek and quell a tear, or let the hand hold up one’s chin. To take from her a thought of fear that comes from deep the bowel within. I say from in my beating chest I say from in my waking mind. I’ll stay till He does bring to rest and only then in dreams I’ll find. In one heart of soulful beating where blood does course the flowing vein I’ll say to you, my words retreating of thoughts I’ve had, I’ll not refrain. For true in soul and true in life I shall to all be courage found. Through times of good and those of strife to guard and keep where joys abound. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
O Goddess of the golden light wherein the Elves and Faeries play. O woman of this waking flight whose whispers softly come to stay. Where does the love of mortal man find the heart of one maiden's dwell? To spring and dance on whitest sand and feel the pulse beat linger tell. ========================================= OH YEAH....hang the moon and make us swoon... romamtic rhymes divine.. Barry this is wonderful!!! and feel the pulse beat linger tell. Love that line...very cool Take a bow poet sir. Well Done |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Not only do I view this as a fine piece of writing, but it is one that has touched me on a cellular level. The strength and love that is conveyed through these words are the same qualities possessed by the man who wrote them. EA |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
This is such romantic and such classically written prose, Barry. A delight to the senses and a delight to the heart. ***Ivy Rose |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You girls need to be careful, I am almost blushing....Geeez, thanx... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Almost blushing? Well, read JM's response a few more times, and do a good job of it! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Barry, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may we all embrace each new day and find the special charity in the innocent and in each other where light resides! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - I'm liking it, I'm liking it.... thank you for your very warm comments... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love when you write with such strong conviction and the flow was wonderful to read aloud... ~smiles Maureen |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry I see such strength of love in these words...though tender touched. Amazing write, dear poet. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Sunny One...if only you could see my cheeks... Noah, you always embrace us...thank you much. BC...you are most welcome...and what I said was from within, heartfelt.. M. Thanx dear heart. Always a pleasure.. Martie, hi there! Thanx dear one... Geez, now I really am.... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Barry, this is SOOOO beautiful. I'm so glad to see all these poets writing these romatic poems. I love ALL poetry, but this type finds a special place in my heart. Do you think it's because I'm so hopelessly "in love"??? Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, kind Sir. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ethel, mayhaps it is....surely it might be. I agree and thank you much... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How could I have missed this one?... Hmmm. As always, an exercise in perfection dear poet. ThisDiamond |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
A wonderfull and mystical poem |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh wow, this is simply too precious for words. Really wonderful! I don't know how I missed this either. One of my favorites! With Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Cool poem! I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry....this is fantastic! You just KNOW I love it!! ~Hugs~ |
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