Open Poetry #23 |
Curious |
Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Curiosity's makin wonder If I am totally a stanger If I could be different I am the only being I know how to be But I am not good enough I keep on faltering I keep on failing you Letting down Letting you lose But when Will I be someone you can count on Someone with a shoulder you can cry on am I someone who you would turn to would you run or walk to my side If I asked you for a favor would look into my eyes would tell me to get lost grow up and run away |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kellie, Yup...I recall the joys of adolesence. It gets better. Good thing, eh? Hang in there. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Larry, I hope it does. I enjoyed talking to you the other evenning. Hope to see you again. Love Kel |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Kellie, This is great. Life does get better as you get older. Dawn |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Oh yeah, life gets even better once your out of High school. LOL Good write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kellie, I like your poem. I don't know how old you are, but from your replies, you must be young, still. You did a very good job in writing this poem. I hope to read more of your work.Thanks for sharing. Love to All, Ethel |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
What a touching poem. Did you know that of all the chapters in your life that teen-aged years are said to be the very, most hardest? It is true and life just keeps getting better. So glad you are writing about this because many of us forgot how hard it is. And, keep writing, it is good for us. Hang in there, A big hug to you, With Warm Regards Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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