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Open Poetry #23

Wake up sleepy Head

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

0 posted 2002-10-14 08:00 PM

her mother would pull the curtans and wisper softly
"Wake up sleepy head."
But the 7-year-old girl would groan and refuse to wake.

When she was sick, her mother would come to take her temperature
"Wake up sleepy head."
But she would groan and go back to sleep.

When she was a teenager and didn't hear her alarm, her mother wouldwake her up
"Wake up sleepy head."
but the tired girl would go back to sleep.

so it went for years, untill her mother got sick with cancer. One night,she got terribly sick.An had to be moved to the hospital.

Her dauter gave her a visit, but she was asleep.
"Wake up sleepy head."
But the woman groaned and would'nt wake.

haydenjames
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since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

1 posted 2002-10-14 08:32 PM

Enjoyed your approach..

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-14 10:29 PM

Sweet poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-14 11:03 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Liz, this is such a beautifully heartbreaking poem, sweet friend, my heart goes out to them both and my prayers are with the mom for her to heal and her daughter, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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