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Open Poetry #23

Sunsets on The Beach

Keith Morgan
Member

since 2001-10-29

Posts 114
Md

0 posted 2002-10-14 12:58 PM

Sunsets On The Beach

The renewal of time
Can be seen upon the shores of solitude,
As the crimson dust of the eve
Is scattered across the dusk filled skies,
Veiling the humble expression of the setting sun;
And the mountains that lie beyond
The edges of the world,
Shiver in quiet silence
As these lavender drops of the coming night
Absorb the day`s warmth.

From across the way,
The sun`s suitor, blows her a kiss
And that majestic yellow king
Slowly fades into reality,
Casting his beaming reflection on the sea;
A mirrored background of his red veiled queen
Looks on in sadness as night falls
And the appearance of her starlings,
Means that she will sleep the dreamers sleep
Until her early morning yawn
Brings the return of the dawn.

Marcel

Write from the soul and the words will flow

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-14 01:32 AM

Keith, I love your little saying. It is very true....("write from the soul and the words will flow") And, your poem was very well written. Thanks for sharing it.
Love To All,
Ethel

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

2 posted 2002-10-14 03:58 AM

A very nice and enticing write.
I will have to view a few more poems by you....
enjoyed much
aloha, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2002-10-14 06:14 AM

Beautifully done, Keith! Lovely!

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

4 posted 2002-10-14 11:23 PM

I have to agree. This is a very beautiful poem.

Dawn

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-10-14 11:24 PM

I saw one of these yesterday. Beautifully written.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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