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The One
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The One |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA 
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You are a good friend and will be until my life ends. I see you in my mind, my dreams, and in reality. Do you know what I think of you? Do you even care? Your eyes shine like diamonds, Your smile is like gold, You say just the right things at the right time, I wish I had you in my arms to hold. You make my heart race, My knees go weak, And my eyes grow wide with excitement. You take my breath away. It doesn’t matter if I see you or not, What matters to me is that you’re part of my life. You may not know it, But I love you and you are the one. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kelly, this is a good poem. Sounds like you fell in love with your best friend, (that is, if the poem is about you personally). That's what happened with me and Gary. To me, it's a key ingredient for a lasting love.....being friends as well as everything else to each other. You've got to "LIKE" someone before you can truly "LOVE" them. Thanks for sharing your poem. ~~With Love And Hugs To All~~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is such a sweet poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I hope you and him meet soon as I wish this happiness of love to come to both nof you forever, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kelly, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Does he know how you feel? This poem would melt the heart of an iceberg. Earth Angel |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Thank you everyone. I'm so glad you've enjoyed it. EarthAngel, I don't know if he knows. I'm afraid to tell him though because even though he escorted me to my senior prom (in May 2002) I think he might have a girlfriend. Even if he didn't he's a senior at Northeastern University after he graduates he'll be going to play Pro Hockey for the Dallas Stars. Either way I don't really have a chance to even try to attempt to be with him. All of my friends say I should give him this poem and tell him how I feel (since I have been feeling this way for about 4 years), but I can't I'm afraid of losing him as a friend. ================================================================ Please feel free to look at my other work... The other new one I have posted is called Desperate. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wish I could say these things...but can't even write them anymore. |
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