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Catch A Star
| Open Poetry #23 |
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Catch A Star |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Catch A Star the night began to write love letters to the moon she strung words tied them tightly sent them on balloons took each gently turning all over to the breeze openingly sending him all she was on the invisible seas one by one he caught them forever shared are ours scattered them to read again changing them to stars I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a lovely picture. Joyce |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, may all your dreams come true and become stars beaded in the eternity bed of your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Wow! this is great!..such a romantic concept.. Loved it, Cher Poetry is: |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...and 'tis the stars wherein I spread the words mine heart has said, for 'tis the stars I know thine eyes see each night, the stars wherein I know you'll read these words I send to thee... jwesley |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, this is such a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. ~~With Love And Hugs To All~~ |
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Denea Furr Junior Member
since 2002-11-03
Posts 31Indiana |
I have to say that I am definately a Daddy's Girl because we both absolutely love your work.BeAuTiFuL. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Helen, This one is especially magnificent. Like it a great deal and when re-reading I can see the special sparkling stars. It is great! Warm Regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what imagery you give! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
 yes. |
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