Open Poetry #23 |
crayola dreams |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
on its way across the miles, your present wrapped and sealed, with peace,love,health and all that stuff, and that famous pink print of my kiss, as always, a box of 64, to my artist lover, that put down his brushes, for a while, cant buy canvas, costs too much, he says, too busy to paint, he says, busy working for the man, he says, trying to make his fortune, he says, so one day, he says he'll gather his paints and dreams and sail off to gaughins island but now your artists heart, just sits and gathers dust, like souveneir shells sitting on shelves, waiting for their sounds to be released like many of us, longing, to be heard, open the box, dear friend, its a start, draw me a rainbow from vegas to jersey, meet me in the middle roberto, amid the black starlit night, and toast the new year....... i love you.......always your dreamgirl |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Lovely belles lettres, hopefully it will inspire. Some beautiful paintings on oak panels and limewood survive from the early 1400's. Bon chance. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
'draw me a rainbow' is such a great line here!!!! I hope your artist friend opens up his box of crayons, and sets himself free!! ~~S~~ Pen how you truly feel... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
A powerful poem of want for blessings for someone loved. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lovely write... may the images you both create endure.. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
May your artist blend those 64 colours into one beautiful expression of his love for you!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Inked, ...every single word. goddamn |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very moving...hope also inspiring to it's intended receiver. Was for me. ThisDiamond |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - you do write them well... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yay, and may the whole 96-crayon selection color your dreams of love and make all these smiles come true for you both! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
96, mistletoe, oh now, i didnt know........ aenimal, when you metnioned about the painting, it just hit a chord, and like this painter of mine, i hate to see talent on the sidelines, thats it.......like my son.......he is one gifted poet/puts my stuff to shame.........if he stops, writing, i just have to kick his butt once in a while |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
This reminds me of someone. wise words inked. |
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