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Withdrawal |
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lil cherry Member
since 2002-10-02
Posts 86Ont, Can. 
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Sweating Crying Screaming Dreaming Wishing Praying For this pain to go away What has happened to you You were so comfortably happy yesterday But now your insides are burning Your stomach is your new worst enemy It hurts every time you inhale Fire then ice But the pain never stops Make it all go away What I wouldn’t do to take just one more Use just once more Just to end this torture If hell is like this Then I hope I’m never there But nothing could be this bad I can’t move, my muscles are like bricks I feel like I’ve been running a marathon Everything hurts I’m hungry but can’t eat I’m thirsty but can’t drink My insides are melting Everything is wasting away The happiness has all flowed out of me Leaving this shell This lifeless creature lying there Someone kill me I can’t endure this anymore Just once more I promise I’ll stop after that I can control it Just not tonight Please one more pill, one more line I need it It’s killing me Thousands of tiny ants eating away at my flesh I’m burning I’m in ice I can’t think I can’t breath I can’t cry anymore I’m consumed Help me, someone please help me No one can hear my cries Who can I tell Who would understand My drugs would They always listened But I can’t move to get to them My head is about to explode How will I go on without them How much longer will this last Just once more Just one more time And then it’s over |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Woo, hair-raising! You really captured the feeling of reality, the desperation and pain of it. Great atmosphere. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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lingering thoughts Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 70Illinois, USA |
Wow, when I had first read the title of this I wasnt thinking of withdrawl this way, it shows every emotion possible when going through this I really like it ! I'll be looking for more of yours ... *Cassandra |
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