Teen Poetry #6 |
my invisable world |
lingering thoughts Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 70Illinois, USA |
tears building up inside i thought this feeling was over trying to talk to you but you wont listen using everyway possible you acted like we were never friends you think i would give up get angry and lose the thought of you instead feelings of depression come rushing like nothing before shaky and worn out theres nothing i can do trying to find a way out of all this unbearing emotion listening to advice ways to make it better knowing none will help i tune it all out thinking of so long ago dazing into my invisable world where everything is how it used to be images of us joking coquettishly laughing nonstop but most of all... us together again hey you guys ! i dont think this is the best of mine but it has as much of my emotion put into as my others... so like always, tell me what you think please!!! *Cassandra |
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infinite disaster Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 69Illinois |
i like it cassie. i think it's a good poem. i'm really sorry with everything that is going on between u and jimmy. i really don't know what to say. but i know it'll get better soon and u know that u can always talk to me. *hugs* much love, akie. |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
hey i liked it really enjoyed reading it sometimes i wish i could write longs one then i tihnk short ones contain as much feelings as long ones anyway keep writing good ones like that and ill keep reading them my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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