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Teen Poetry #6
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xxxnuttyangelxxx
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since 2002-12-06
Posts 72
New York
0 posted 2002-12-09 02:57 PM


---This is something short but has a lot of meaning behind it--


I feel trapped behind my eyes,
and stuck inside my thoughts,
listening to sharp voices pierce my ears...
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Rainbowdust
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since 2002-12-05
Posts 320
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2002-12-09 08:35 PM

Hey again

Poetry doesn't always have to long to be affective and I really liked this one! It got me thinking... is there a way out if you're trapped inside yourself? Well done to express so much with so few words.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.
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