Fury in the Hands of a Woman

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Teen Poetry #6

Fury in the Hands of a Woman

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

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Riding

0 posted 2002-12-07 12:25 PM

Platitudes whispered to the enemy
and secrets aired in the open...
You speak to her as you should me

Hatred whispered in the halls of space
I want you to feel my rage and my pain...
See what you've done to me

Take an envelope...
fill it with chocolate...
  watch it melt...
       That
   is my heart

Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

1 posted 2002-12-07 12:36 PM

rah rah.

-Stinky Twinkie-

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2002-12-07 01:06 AM

I can feel your rage and your pain. As usual a good poem.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-12-07 01:34 AM

Rhonda~

   "Take an envelope...
    fill it with chocolate...
      watch it melt...
           That
       is my heart"

This hit hard...VERY powerful.
You already know my reaction to this piece,
so, for now...just *HUGS*...big ones.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Jaime

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4 posted 2002-12-07 02:37 PM

I like anger. It's a nice break from 'I love you forever' crap that you normally see in poetry. I thought that this was far from being a simple vent though, but rather a meaningful poem combined with feelings of anger and hatred.

- Jaime

i was here

branden726

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since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

5 posted 2002-12-07 03:18 PM

Chills good write.

Smoothy
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since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

6 posted 2002-12-07 04:33 PM

"Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned". Whoever this guy is, he better look out for some emtional tidal waves.

Love conquers all, so I must be in a losing battle.

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