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Teen Poetry #6

Redirection

LTEvans
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
Lenham, England

0 posted 2002-12-06 10:32 AM

Redirection

Anywhere you stay.
Any other time.
Any one.

Redirection is the rule,
Ruling parties should be ignored,
Ignorance is enough to be bliss,
This the way the world turns,
If it turns then it must be alive.

Anything you say.
I have done this before.
Anyway?

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2002-12-06 01:10 PM

Very different poem. I liked it. You have a way with words, they flow very nicely from your pen. Or is it a pencil?

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

2 posted 2002-12-07 04:16 AM

indeed, this was a very different piece, but still a talented write. you seem to have some strong views in this. how about giving us a little explaination as to your insight on this write eh? i'd like to see what you thought when you wrote this and what it means to you. ^^ love the last two lines of the middle stanza. keep posting.

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

3 posted 2002-12-07 04:35 PM

Stop the spin from rooming, I wanna get off!

Love conquers all, so I must be in a losing battle.

Ephraim
Junior Member

since 2002-12-07

Posts 24

4 posted 2002-12-07 06:47 PM

When you wrote this, was the opinions expressed yours, the current attitude of the identity you connect with, or just randomness you collected?

Very different poem. Enjoyed, however.

~Ephraim

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