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Teen Poetry #6

Untitled ((because I can't think of one..))

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-12-07 12:03 PM

Tonight,
I think I'll lie in the snow,
And stare up at the stars.
I'll snap a picture,
Of the beautiful winter sky,
And tape it to my ceiling.
So when along comes a lonely summer night,
I can lie on my bed,
And stare up at the stars.
I'll remember those nights,
Spent in your front yard,
When we kept each other warm,
Oblivious to the biting wind,
And the icy air,
Knowing only that,
The night should never end,
And the snow should never melt,
So that maybe,
Just maybe,
We could keep each other warm,
Forever.

"It's hard to look in the mirror these days when everyone else has everything you'd rather be."-Saves The Day

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

1 posted 2002-12-07 12:07 PM

I wish I could do the same. God, I hate summer. Winter owns all other seasons.

-Stinky Twinkie-

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2002-12-07 02:31 AM

That was beautiful, not much else I can say, because that's what it was.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

3 posted 2002-12-07 08:39 PM

WONDERFUL!
*Allison*

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2002-12-07 10:50 PM

I loved this one too, although there's something to be said for clear summer nights as well!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2002-12-28 04:00 PM

StellarChica~
This is a beautifully written piece,
and I very much enjoyed reading it.
I don't know if you're interested in
title ideas or not, but if you are, I think that,
"Forever Winter" could work. Just a suggestion, of course.
Nice job on this.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

6 posted 2002-12-28 04:14 PM

" Eternal Winter "

" Forever Warmth "

" The Nevermelting Winter "

just a few suggestions... Beautiful write!

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