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Avis
Junior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 38
Raleigh, NC, USA

0 posted 2002-12-04 01:09 AM

The furthest distance of all
Is never measured by mile.
Instead, it's measured by the space
'Twixt me and her beautiful smile.

Her deep, mysterious eyes
Can't meet up with mine.
Are they full of lies?
No, I'm sure they're fine.

Whats there, I do not know.
What's there, I do not ask.
But God, Oh God, I sure do wonder
What's under that wonderful mask.

In dreams, I scream.
In dreams, I shout.
I'll help you get through it, I promise...
But now, I'm just missing out.

Written: 10/15/02
Dedication: To a friend who was hiding from truth.

Peace and Love,
~KEV~

"An eye for an eye only leads to more blindness."
~Margaret Atwood

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

1 posted 2002-12-04 05:33 AM

Nice poem I can really relate to it. Keep up the awsome work I can't wait to read more.
Lauren

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

2 posted 2002-12-04 12:04 PM

This was a great poem, man! You have talent!
Keep on writin'!

Rich

"You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2002-12-04 05:44 PM

That was awesome! I even liked your dedication. Beautifully writen poem! Well done. Laugh often, love much, live well.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

4 posted 2002-12-04 05:48 PM

Somebody just called and said that you aren't missing much. Just kidding (I cant help it). It was good poem, very well written.

-Stinky Twinkie-

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2002-12-15 03:28 AM

Avis~
Very nicely written piece here.
I very much enjoyed reading this.
Keep up the great writing.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2002-12-15 05:32 PM

Liked this one too Kev... especially the first stanza! Good on ya!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

7 posted 2002-12-16 01:40 PM

Do you speak French?

Sorry, that was mostly irrelevant. I loved the poem. Again.

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

xxxnuttyangelxxx
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
New York

8 posted 2002-12-16 04:06 PM

Another great poem..You are very talented..keep up the awesome work

shea

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