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Teen Poetry #6

Pretending

rOxXbabY391
Member

since 2002-12-14

Posts 71

0 posted 2002-12-14 06:49 PM

I'm done pretending that I'm alright
Acting like day when I feel like night
I'm done pretending that everything is okay
Like i can make it through one more day
Cause I know that I'm not, and it just doesn't seem fair
I don't know if you know or that you even still care
I don't think I can pretend even one more night
Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?"
When nothing is right

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

1 posted 2002-12-14 06:52 PM

REMEMBER...SPACE. LOL Also you could post more than one poem at a time..just like..post 2 at a time or someting...but on one page so that there arent 4 pages..there are 2..kk
But good poem..
*Allison*

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2002-12-16 02:55 PM

xxxnuttyangelxxx
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
New York

3 posted 2002-12-16 04:54 PM

quote--

Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?"
When nothing is right

very very true... good write, keep up the good work..

shea

rOxXbabY391
Member

since 2002-12-14

Posts 71

4 posted 2002-12-16 06:23 PM

heyYy everyone thanks for your thoughts! I was thinking of a new title "Acting Another Day"
just a thought
wat do yall think??
~*~eMiLy~*~

"I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right.

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