Teen Poetry #6 |
Silent Words |
moonguardian2004 Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 64MA, USA |
i love you mom i love you dad are words i say everyday i love you sis i love you bro are words i also say but these words one can't hear one that is small and round my nephew Conner who now lays in the ground i love you little Conner your auntie is always here as long as i am here to listen you shall never fear those monsters that come out at night the ones you never saw belive me little guy you are better of without the fright if you can hear these words right now there are so many things to tell you but i don't know how i might not be good with words but this i can say i love you little Conner and your auntie is here to stay |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Oh my goodness, that was so beautiful and touching! I can especially relate to that because I've been an aunt since I was 8 years old, recently the number of nephews and nieces went up to six. New baby girl. But I realize I don't tell them all often enough that I love them. I need to do that. thank you for your write! WinterWren |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I don't know you but *hugs you tight* this may be hard to believe, but wow... I'm crying... I lost a niece, and I feel the same way that you described. Email me if you want to talk, okay? |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
Omg poems cant get much more beautiful then this. This was a wonderful write about something that is so hard to even think about writing. I also had a tear in my eye after i read this. Keep on writing you definitely have the talent. -Chris- |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Aww.. *hugz* This was a very touching poem! It was wonderfully well written, and is so full of emotion! Rich "You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!" |
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Smoothy Member
since 2002-12-02
Posts 119The dark side of the moon |
Oh man. My nephew may get on my nerves sometimes, but I can't imagine him not being there. I'm so sorry for you. |
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LadyDracaWolf Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 73CA |
I know all too well how much the loss of a loved one can hurt. But all we can do is try to heal, and in turn, heal those around us. Death is not extinguishing the light; it is putting out the lamp because the dawn has come. Rabindranath Tagore Poet, Philosopher, Nobel Laurea [This message has been edited by LadyDracaWolf (12-05-2002 10:31 AM).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww hun...this was absolutely beautiful . Standing on the edge of the world |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
moonguardian2004~ What a beautiful and loving write for your nephew. You love for him comes through in every word. I'm sorry that you and your family have suffered such a loss, and I wish you all the best in months and years to come. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (12-15-2002 04:33 AM).] |
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xxxnuttyangelxxx Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 72New York |
Beautiful, touching, sad, powerful...these words only describe some of this piece you wrote.. This was an absolutely great write. I have never lost a nephew or niece but i no how it feels to lose a family member and im veryy sorry ::Hugz:: Keep up the writing it is beautiful.. shea |
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