Teen Poetry #6 |
I hate the way |
quik Member
since 2002-11-27
Posts 91Dinwiddie,Virginia |
I Hate The Way I hate the way you say you just don’t care I hate the way you make my life miserable and things that are not fair I hate the way when I get in trouble you call me crazy I hate the you say your just “ Flat Out Lazy” I hat the way you look at me all crazy, just because I answered a question straight back I hate the way you just want to give me a good slap I hate the way you don’t put my talent to no use I hate the way you think everything is a plain ol’ excuse I hate the way you just throw my talent down the drain I hate the way you make me suffer with all this pain I hate the way you think I’m going to get mad I hate the way sometimes knowing that you’re my dad I hate the way you call me “Stupid” or “Dumb” How could you say that, I’m your Son I hate the way you just give up on something that you can finish I hate the way you know its something you can replenish I hate the way you say “ I give up, I’m though” I hate the way you say, “ I don’t want nothing to do with you I hate the way you don’t think I’m going to change I hate the way you think I’m just going to be the same I hate the way you don’t want to guide me no more down the right route Because if you were a real father you wouldn’t send your sons nowhere but keep him here and help him out! |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
hey quik,i really feel for u on that poem.it was so expressive and well put together.stop hating ur dad ok...they just dont know how to show the love they so much feel.give him a chance will u...and u too try and be a better person for yourself and not for your dad's or anyone's sake.holla back! will u p.s u were so mad while writing the poem u made quite a number of typo. errors.not to worry! the message comes perfectly across. |
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