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Teen Poetry #6

serenity in darkness???

Star T
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since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

0 posted 2002-12-03 12:01 PM

some poems just dont have only 1 dimension maybe this is one of them...

Its dark once again,
And i'm all by myself.
All is so quiet and extremely strange.

Very soon i'll be gone,
Into a world of dreaming,
Where i exist,
Even during the day.

Soon u wont see me around,
Cos i'd have left,
Into the world of dark daylight,
Where serenity ever dwells.

The darkness is taking over,
And now i feel its blankets,
Beginning to cloud my view,
I feel my eyes getting heavy,
And my lips turn sour and dry.

Slowly i fall into the state of unconciousness,
And swiftly drift away,
To a place where no troubles are,
A place where atlast,
Peace i will find...forever.

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
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1 posted 2002-12-03 12:14 PM

"Into a world of dreaming, where I exist even during the day." Really liked that line, different poem, but good!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

2 posted 2002-12-03 12:30 PM

I swear this poem almost put me to sleep. not because it was bad, because of all the references to sleep and dreams and blanke........*falls asleep*

-Stinky Twinkie's day is over-

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
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3 posted 2002-12-03 02:30 PM

I've been there and back a million times so i know exactly what your talking about. great write..thanks for sharing

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

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