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Teen Poetry #6

Spiders

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

0 posted 2002-12-02 01:21 PM

Leave me alone to live alive,
In my own tangled web,
Of twisted thoughts and shattered dreams,
Demons mark the X that’s my spot,
Alone I lie in that web,
I live, only to fear another day,
Waiting for the spiders, the spiders to save me,
And take me out of this web,
But all the while I fear them,
Their fangs dripping with venom,
The ever-ready spiders liquefy my insides,
Suck them out and then...
I'm just a shell of a man.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2002-12-02 11:48 PM

Wow that was really graphic and straight to the point, different, I like it.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2002-12-03 02:06 AM

Oooh, dark... I like

No, on second thought, let's not go to Camelot.
~ Arthur (Monty Python Search for the Holy Grail)
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Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

3 posted 2002-12-03 11:12 AM

Thanks everybody I really didn't know where this was going until the end. I was just a bunch of random words that I pieced together like a puzzle.

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