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StellarChica
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since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-12-01 09:40 PM

I couldn't begin to explain,
How much I hate you.
{But, oh God, please don't let me go..}
If I'm falling apart when I'm with you,
I don't want to know how I'll be without you.
You must be an emotional prodigy,
You have the ability to make me the most not alone that I've ever been,
While making me more alone than ever.
{That's what I call skill.}
Hey, maybe you could teach me how to forget about you?
You seem to have forgetting about me down pretty well.

"It's hard to look in the mirror these days when everyone else has everything you'd rather be."-Saves The Day

Savage Quiescence
Member

since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

1 posted 2002-12-02 06:15 PM

Bravo! I really loved this one, especially the first half. The last three lines did not come across as strongly as the rest, for some reason. But I certainly think this is one for the library! Thanks a bunch for the read!
~Sky

"Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

2 posted 2002-12-02 11:31 PM

I like the title a lot. I can't say much for the rest of the poem though. I don't know, it just didn't strike a chord with me.....or something like that.

-Stinky Twinkie-

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2002-12-03 01:52 AM

"Hey, maybe you could teach me how to forget about you?
You seem to have forgetting about me down pretty well."
These lines just about made me cry. I don't know what to say. It's a very powerful poem, and I thank you for the opportunity to read it

No, on second thought, let's not go to Camelot.
~ Arthur (Monty Python Search for the Holy Grail)
I'm Rhondiforous!

anawnda
Member

since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

4 posted 2002-12-03 08:28 AM

hey how ya been?

sorry i havent visited this site and havent read your posts for a long time but anyway all i can say is that i really love this poem, im trying to think of maybe a more clever thing to say than i really love this poem without taking away what iw ant to imply but the heck!!! I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!

* you can hurt me...with your bare hands,or
you can hurt me using the sharp edge of what you said.....* jewel kilcher

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